Friday, 23 January 2009

The Elevator Pitch Part III b

In the latest post on Rants and Ramblings Rachelle is asking Q4U: What's Your Book About? She is very kindly offering critiques on any pitches that are posted.

Elevator pitches at the ready!

I've taken the plunge (I was feeling brave) and went with the latest version of my hook.

Hunted across the galaxy by a powerful religious cult, an amnesiac searches for clues to his past and the forgotten knowledge of a prototype weapon that has the power to enslave billions.

Update: I should point out that Rachelle does not represent Sci-Fi or Fantasy but she's a good sport and she may well critique it anyway.

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